Editorial Notes 1
- "Tattooings" is not a word in English. (Mihaela)
- "Tattooing" is a verb, not a noun, please use it as such. (Mihaela)
- Margaritas don't come in bouquets ("the beauty of a butterfly fluttering near a bouquet of margaritas" in Butterfly Tattoo Art). (Mihaela)
- Don't use ":" when "–" is required the "–" should be used when separating two parts of a sentence (you may like to read the article on punctuation rules in English – see link on the recommended list on the right).
- Pay close attention to keyword combination that might represent a Tier-1 keyword – don't use these combinations as variations. e.g.: in the article on "Joker Tattoos" (primary) "joker tattoo" was used correctly as Tier-1. However, "joker tattooing" (also Tier-1) was also used and mistakenly marked as 2 variations. Remember, it's not the color of the highlight that makes it a variation or a Tier-1.

2 Comments:
Dear Tommy, thank your for your comments. However, I do have two points where I do not agree with you:
1. If a Miami Herald Staff Writer is using "bouquet of margaritas" in an article, than maybe I was not so wrong: http://www.latinamericanstudies.org/bay-of-pigs/leo-baker.htm
2.Tattooing is a verb, yes. It can be used as a noun as well. Example : Ancient Marks: The Sacred Art of Tattooing and Body Marking http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0965922723/sr=8-45/qid=1147370101/ref=sr_1_45/104-2248744-9335966?%5Fencoding=UTF8.
Hi Mihaela.
Regarding the "bouquet of margaritas", it was used as a kind of sad joke. Note the use: "place a bouquet of margaritas—daisies—on it" where daisies is the thing that does come in bouquets. This writer sort of reinvented the term, using his literary freedom, with margaritas.
Now about "Tattooing" - it IS used as a verb in the page you linked to here.
Anyhow, I appriciate your comments.
Tommy
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